Back to the Basics
Every time I start writing a new book, I intend to read or re-read books about the craft of writing as I work. (The practice evaporates about two weeks into each project.) For the current book, I actually pulled all the books I wanted to read off the shelf and stacked them on the floor next to my reading chair, where they sat as a reproachful monument to good intentions.
Earlier this week I led a Zoom discussion about writing history for the American Society of Journalists and Authors as part of their virtual conference. In the course of preparing, I pulled those books about writing non-fiction and dipped in and out, reading the passages I’d marked as inspiring or thought-provoking or simply irritating.* (Yes, I am a barbarian and mark up books as I read. It’s my way of having a conversation with the author)
It turned out to be a useful exercise, not only in preparing for the Zoom discussion, but as a manageable version of my idealized reading project. I sought out passages I remembered. I stumbled onto passages I had forgotten. I made a list of tips and ideas and anecdotes to share with the participants in my Zoom discussion.
The heart of what I had to say came down to three ground rules:
1. You can’t make stuff up.
Which is not to say that you can’t engage in imaginative re-construction based on what you do know as long as you tell the reader that’s what you’re doing. In fact, historians depend on some variation of “We don’t know whether ————, but it seems likely and this is why.” The authors of two of the most exciting works of history that I have read in recent months take this one step further. (Reviews of both are coming to a blog post near you at some point in the future.) They envision a scene, and then step back to discuss the evidence on which they based the scene. I’m not sure I have the chops to pull that off.
2. You can’t leave stuff out if it will change your story, your conclusions, or way we view your main character in significant ways.
3. You need to keep a grasp on the chronology, both in your head and on the page. Even if you abandon a straight line from beginning to end–and realistically, every story requires at least one side trip–you need to leave your readers clues that allow them to orient themselves in time. As a reader, I hate it when I think “Wait a minute, when is this?”
Nothing surprising here, but sometimes it’s good to remind ourselves of the basics.
Today my non-fiction library is going back on the shelf. Job accomplished.
*I am embarrassed to admit that it didn’t occur to me until this morning to look at earlier issues of my newsletter: twice a month for almost five years I’ve written about thinking and writing about history. *headsmack* If this is something you might be interested in, here’s a link to a recent issue: https://bit.ly/3hGyh3l
Mulan, Again
Three and a half years ago, pen and paper in hand, I sat down to watch Disney’s 1998 animated film Mulan for the first time since it was originally released.
I came to the task with some uneasiness. I was in the midst of writing Women Warriors. The historical (or perhaps legendary) figure Mulan is one of the women I discuss in the book* and I wanted to check out how Disney’s Mulan aligned with the “real” Mulan. Although I remembered enjoying Mulan when it came out, I did not remember many details about the film, except that Eddie Murphy played a smart-mouthed dragon–not a feature of any of the Chinese versions of the story that I knew.
I was more than pleasantly surprised. The film was as delightful as I remembered: well-constructed in terms of both plot and aesthetics, with sly wit and an occasional punch to the emotional gut. And to my amazement, it kept most of the elements of the original story, with one critical exception. Mulan’s fellow soldiers discover her deception when she is wounded–a historically valid change since this was the way in which women who fought disguised as men were most often exposed.
Last weekend, I sucked it up and paid the “premiere” price to watch Disney’s new, live action version of Mulan.** I came to the task with some uneasiness. And I was pleasantly surprised. Disney did not attempt to simply reproduce the animated movie. Instead it was its own thing.*** The style reminded me of the magical athleticism of Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon, which I had greatly enjoyed when it came out in 2000. The real life version addresses the difficulties of a woman disguising herself as a man, something I don’t remember the animated version doing, at least not in such a realistic way. (With the caveat that it’s been morethan three years since I watched it.) The addition of a second powerful female character enriches the “girl power” theme of movie.
In short, I’m glad I saw the new version. But I must admit, I cannot imagine watching it again, unlike the animated version which I will happily watch again. In fact, the animated Mulan is in my immediate future.
*If you’re interested in seeing what I wrote about Mulan, you can check out this piece on the Beacon Press blog: Daughter Archer Soldier Man: The Enduring, Cross-Dressing Folk Heroine Mulan (If blatant self-promotion makes you queasy, close your eyes for the next bit.) Or you could buy the book.
**What else could I do? If I waited to see the film in December, the conversation would already be over.*** And, as My Own True Love pointed out, we would have paid the same amount to see the film in a first run theater. Which we certainly would have done if times were different.
*** In fact, in the week between my watching the film and sitting down to write this, the conversation has moved on, taking a political and social justice turn that makes my own discussion of the film feel a tad frivolous. I don’t think I can make a meaningful contribution to that conversation. If you are interested, I found this article in The Lily thought provoking. I’m still processing.
****I strongly believe that this is the test of a successful movie re-make (or for that matter, a film adaptation of a novel.) If all a director does is replicate the earlier work, point by point, why not simply watch the original?
Reading My Way to The 19th Amendment
Like many of us, I had plans for the hundredth anniversary of the 19th Amendment. One of those plans was to run a series of blog posts about the suffrage movement in July and August. Then my life took a sharp turn: first I wrote a history book for kids in thirty days and then headed off to the Wisconsin State Archives to do research.Instead of lots of blog posts, I gave you no blog posts.
I’ve just finished three out of four weeks of fishing in the archives. (If you want to know more about my experience there, check out the latest issue of my newsletter. Since I’ve got a couple of days in which to catch my breath before I head out again, I thought I’d share some of the suffrage-related books on my shelves, with links to a few earlier blog posts related to the books. Here we go:
April Young Bennett. Ask a Suffragist: Stories and Wisdom from America’s First Feminists.
Ellen Carol Dubois. Suffrage: Women’s Long Battle for the Vote.
Kimberly A. Hamlin. Free Thinker: Sex, Suffrage, and the Extraordinary Life of Helen Hamilton Gardener.
Theresa Kaminski. Dr. Mary Walker’s Civil War.
Mike Kendall and A. D’Amico. Amazons, Abolitionists, and Activists: A Graphic History of Women’s Fight for Their Rights.
Nancy B. Kennedy. Women Win the Vote: 19 for the 19th Amendment
Brooke Kroeger. The Suffragents: How Women Used Men to Get the Vote.
Allison K. Lange. Picturing Political Power: Images in the Women’s Suffrage Movement.
Kate Clarke Lemay. Votes for Women! A Portrait of Persistence. (This is the catalog for the Smithsonian exhibit of the same name. )
Obviously there are many more good books on the history of the 19th amendment, but this should get you started.
Please let me know if there are other books related to the women’s suffrage movement and the 19th amendment that you would recommend.
In the meantime, I have some research to do.